Would someone please evaluate my paragraph and let me know any constructive criticism that you may have?
Chapter Three- Paragraph First Draft
Lynnel has a personality that motivates everyone to smile. She is friendly to all those who come her way. She can be comical at the right time. Turning negatives into positives, she always sees the best in every situation. Even when life is handing her a bunch of lemons, she doesn’t let it get her down. I can always be sure to find a cheerful email waiting in my inbox. I have even awoken on occasion to find a little flower tucked away on my front porch. She is a beautiful person inside and out, always sharing a little piece of happiness with other people. Honesty is of utmost importance to her. Her cheerful and sweet nature can just turn your frown upside down.
The Topic- Someone you Like or Dislike
Narrowed Topic- My Friend Lynnels Personality
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